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-- Red Kimono --

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F-AYN-T
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I feel bad for not being able to update in a long time D:
But then again I am soooooo busy I can't even take care of myself sometimes anymore x (

This is a commission for *kimmie1102, which I liked so much, i decided to put it here.

STEP BY STEP OF THIS ARTWORK AT MY TUMBLR >> [link]

Thank you for the continuous support :">
Hope you all are well :D

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    Tools: Mechanical pencil, watercolor, colored pencil, 8B pencil
Image size
2315x3467px 12.8 MB
Model
Deskjet Ink Advant K209a-z
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License
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Fellier
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

By now I'm sure we've all seen a pretty girl in a kimono/yukata, but I must say her eyes are very striking to me. They have a depth, but it's soft and charming, almost pulling you in.
The design isn't anything too original, but the pattern of her sash gives it almost a tribal feel, the added petals compliment the lace trim, and the bright red is a nice touch to offset the dark pattern.

Her right arm however bothers me. I can see where you were going with it, but the arch of it looks almost rubbery in a way, perhaps because her hand is angled strangely, and very thin. Under your pinky, it should be rounder to show the muscle underneath, but I see no definition of that here.

Overall, I love the pose and the bold colors you chose. Keep it up!