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LoL..thats her story. All in this one poem that I invented XD (it sucks yes I know..I dont really know how to make poems..:()
here's the poem (clearer version:XD:)

This is her Story

Selfishness, dishonesty,
this is the life I live with you..
Limping, crawling,
hear my heart it aches to be free..
You restrict me from the world,
you dampen my soul..
Every morning is pathetic,
every night is torture..
While I live everyday,
like a doll mishandled..
You just watch there,
but never know how I really feel..
Well I wouldn't complain,
this is the story of my life..
And everyday as I live by,
i'll wait for the day..
That you'll finally realize,
who I really Am.


yes this is teh poem :XD:
drawing:
time: waa I seriously dont know :XD:
tools: pencil and ballpen (as usual ;))
manipulated with cs ;P

© ~F-AYN-T
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I love it is amazing one of the best poems I had ever seen! I really love the art work it was a little hard to read but the plot made up for the writing.And I also love it becous I am a huge fan of your art as you can see my profile pitchure is coler burst. Overall the poem and the artwork was amazing I loved it! Oh and I disagree with all of the mean reveiws on this amazing poem and artwork! And I think the artwork went perfectly with the story!!!!!!!!! <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/i/l/i…" alt=":iconiloveitplz:" title="IloveItplz"/> <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/b/l/b…" alt=":iconblushplz:" title="BlushPlz"/> the poem was pretty amazing!!