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The color scheme is a little unbalanced with the dress and wings matching too much and therefore making the pink wing stand out less than the black one. This could be remedied by making the pink wing white so that they both stand out and to give a stronger illusion that the girl is battling between good and evil. I think that the mechanical arm also should have slowly developed instead of appearing immediately after the dress strap ends. I do like how the hair color is not simply one color but varying shades.
The emotion in this isn't clear to me, unfortunately. I'm honestly not sure what emotion this is trying to convey. Her eyes are well done but her expression does not come across easily. Maybe if the tilt of her eyebrows were more developed and the lines of her face were more distinctive, it would be clearer.
The originality of this is fairly high though I have seen quite a few drawings of angels and fairies that are split in half between good and evil.
The placement of everything is well done and properly centered though the reason why pink feathers are falling out on both sides and yet black feathers are not falling out at all is unclear. I still enjoy that elegant touch so that the background is not simply blank.
All in all, this is a beautiful piece in spite of its minor faults and it is definitely going in my favorites.
Anywhoo, first I just have to warn you that I have nothing bad to say about this drawing. I feel like this piece is gorgeous and couldn't be any better, the anatomy is nearly perfect, and the lines are stunning. The watercolor style you use to create these wonderful pictures is stunning as well, it takes my breath away! Her colors go well together, and the different colored wings + the mechanical arm really give this piece a unique feel. I love the softness of her expression, and the almost innocent vibe she gives off. The shading of her hair, face and skin really does help apply the sense of innocence to her, as well as the colors you chose for the background and dress. You sure do know how to set a mood ;]
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