Lolita. ver.2

(Be forewarned that I'm new to writing critique, so I apologize if it isn't as helpful and constructive as it should be! But I will tell you what I love about it!)

I'd like to point out what a beautiful eye for colour you have. The shades of cerulean blue and pale/ashy blue look absolutely lovely. The soft blue around the character adds a calming vibe, but at the same time this cute character seems to have a little spice in her! ;D Maybe it's her eye makeup that gives off that effect, but I like it. Her lips, eyes, and hair are beautiful-beautiful.

The reason I knocked off so much from originality was because the design was probably made by the one who commissioned you, but that's not really your fault. I'm sure you did the character justice and she is in a very cute pose.

Overall this piece has a dreamy quality about it, and the textures and colours are reminiscent of one of those old photos, like one of those ethereal toy-camera shots, like lomography, kind of like this photo but not exactly: [link] or [link]

I can't properly explain it, though I hope you understand my gist, ahaha. ^^"

The character's personality: she's so spicy looking while retaining some sweetness/cuteness; I'd like to go partying with her. ;D Your technique is very well done. I love watercolours, or whatever it is you used to colour this with. Also your anatomy seems quite proper to me; no strange bulges anywhere...though I'm still an amateur when it comes to anatomy so that may be why I can't point anything out that needs to be fixed--sorry! ^^"

It's a great job--keep going! You're work will only continue to improve! This is fantastic! ♥