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Lolita. ver.2 by F-AYN-T Lolita. ver.2 by F-AYN-T
Totally unrelated picture, but Merry Christmas Eve everyone! :heart:

Commission done for :iconyummycookie78: :heart:
Character / dress design belongs to her :3
Promoting my free ART GIVEAWAY :heart: It's still ongoing until the 31st!
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:iconfeyna:
This is my first critique, so sorry if it isn't so professional...

Vision:
This picture has just a stunning composition of colors, that blend really well and just fit together.
Her expression and hair are just amazing!

Originality:
It's a commission, so not really Original, but the pose and the expression are really stunning.

Technique: You can hardly see the individual strokes of the brush and it all just blends well.

Impact: Overall just a stunning piece, everything fits, just perfect!
The hair just flows perfectly and the light background makes this piece complete.
Xxx Feyna
Merry Christmas!
Keep it up!
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Critique by Me10900 Dec 24, 2011, 10:00:55 PM
Well, I'll do it in the same format the person before me did. :)

Vision:
The colors and shading is light and subtle. Colors can usually change moods of someone, and, believe it or not, this put me in a Christmas mood. It reminded me very much of snow.

Originality:
It is a commission and the pose is pretty simple, so it's kinda hard to score this category high. The one thing I cane see, though, is there's emotion on her face, somewhat like a cute smile.

Technique:
Would give this 10 stars if I could! You didn't over do folds, the shading was subtle (but noticeable), and every single thing adds a different effect in this picture.

Impact: I love the flowing effect she has. It's very elegant, yet cute.

MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR <3
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:iconmetalraptor:
Metalraptor Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gorgeous dress, beautifully drawn. ^_^
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:iconmayu-tanuki:
mayu-tanuki Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
pretty! *-*
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:iconzellomine:
zellomine Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
AWESOME :)
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:iconyuzexion:
Yuzexion Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing! > w <
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:iconhoshicho:
hoshicho Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012   Traditional Artist
Very beautiful work;; your coloring is amazing!! :love: :heart:
and I love the dress;;
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:iconnatsukido:
NatsuKido Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012   Artist
Very nice *-*
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b0bcat16 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
hello
i really love this
it looks so good
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:iconbladekusinagi:
bladekusinagi Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
HD!!!
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fallyygirl Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
ur so good at drawing IT HURTS!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconzkfanart:
zkfanart Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
Sorry, I took so long to comment this one ^^; Is so cute for the nice outfit and colors texture! and her sweety red lips... oh, she wants kiss ;) Lovely work :hug:
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
It's okay! thank you so much :D
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:iconzkfanart:
zkfanart Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
Welcome and welcome! :hug:
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:iconthelamplighter:
TheLamplighter Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Very cool design as far as the whole character goes. I'm sure that the person who commissioned it is very happy :)
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:iconyummycookie78:
yummycookie78 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BTW!!!This drawing is still safe with me!!!:D:heart:
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:icontinatree:
TinaTree Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
thats so beautiful *-*
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:iconkarinyamazaka:
KarinYamazaka Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
So beautiful=D
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:iconplanxtafroggie:
planxtafroggie Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Worth dancing around in! ^^
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:iconpiroji:
piroji Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
so pretty :)
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:iconxxaiko-chanxx:
xxAiko-chanxx Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful <3
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:icongraveyardancing45:
graveyardancing45 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
ADORABLE!
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:iconsouruuriin:
Souruuriin Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
this is soo pretty >u<
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:icond-mowmow:
D-mowmow Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Gorgeous pic
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
Shes wonderful
Lovely girl
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:iconpunk0000:
punk0000 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Student General Artist
i love the outfit! its cute :love:
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:iconannasasha:
AnnaSasha Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pretty! Your art is always so detailed. :)
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:iconyariyu:
Yariyu Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Student General Artist
The colours are so vibrant X3
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:iconmiyutheevilprincess:
miyutheevilprincess Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
I want such dress >W< Merry Christmas :*
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:iconwishberry:
wishberry Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011  Student General Artist
I LOVE IT SO MUCH GAHHHH YUSOPRO?!!!
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011
thank you > v <
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:iconwishberry:
wishberry Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Student General Artist
...so... cute... *starts foaming at mouth*
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:iconamuletstar:
AmuletStar Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Absolutely beautiful, that dress design is gorgeous. (:
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011
thanks x)
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:iconamuletstar:
AmuletStar Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome. (:
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:iconlior-art:
Lior-Art Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
So moving :rose:
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:iconoooff:
Oooff Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011
This so so pretty! It's so well done, I'm amazed!! :D
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:iconcartooncoolhero:
CartoonCoolHero Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, it's so cool n_n
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:icondoodl3zfreaky:
Doodl3zfreaky Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So pretty. ; w ;
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:iconabsolutequality:
AbsoluteQuality Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011
What do you use to color?
It looks amazing XD
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011
watercolor! :3
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:iconabsolutequality:
AbsoluteQuality Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
Wow , this makes it way much awesome-er cuz I fail at water colore xD
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:iconlazerbot:
lazerbot Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
amazing
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:iconmortegax13:
Mortegax13 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
majnificent!!! i love ur eye for detail and neatness!!!
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:iconorionwitch:
Orionwitch Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
which materials u used in this piece?
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011
watercolor :D
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:iconorionwitch:
Orionwitch Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
beautiful
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:iconart-game-lover:
Art-game-lover Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
awe she's pretty
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:iconorangefuss:
ORANGEFUSS Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011  Student General Artist
I really do love how you make em details. ; A ;
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:iconwhiterockscythe:
WhiteRockScythe Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011
i like the way you draw hair
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:iconspartan500:
Spartan500 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011
beautiful! very well done! Near perfect! :iconclapplz:
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:iconhotlikeiice:
hotlikeiice Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011
Beautiful. I love her hair, and the dress is just gorgeous
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