Well, I'll do it in the same format the person before me did.
Vision: The colors and shading is light and subtle. Colors can usually change moods of someone, and, believe it or not, this put me in a Christmas mood. It reminded me very much of snow.
Originality: It is a commission and the pose is pretty simple, so it's kinda hard to score this category high. The one thing I cane see, though, is there's emotion on her face, somewhat like a cute smile.
Technique: Would give this 10 stars if I could! You didn't over do folds, the shading was subtle (but noticeable), and every single thing adds a different effect in this picture.
Impact: I love the flowing effect she has. It's very elegant, yet cute.