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: I think shes pissed : by =F-AYN-T:iconF-AYN-T:

Categories Manga/Anime > Traditional Media > Drawings

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Artist's Comments

...well she looks like it? XD
hohoooooooo~~~

Well this started as a practice sketch, then I kinda liked the result, so I put this up x_x

...and this is how I sketch PX

something is wrong again with her anatomy again, I just know it XDD hehehehe XD

I think shes possessed by noise heeee :B
(too much TWEWY D: )

................maybe the reason shes pissed is because I put a flower in her hair :| lmao~

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Tools: Pencil, PSCS3 for texture
Time: 2 hrs

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Art / Character © =F-AYN-T

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=kai-isolated Sep 20, 2009, 4:16:45 AM
A sketch? THIS wonderful piece of work is a sketch? The awesome lines just blew me away. Such delicate and precise line work; the thin and bold edged just fit perfectly with the picture. The added texture made everything looks absolutely classy and nice. not to forget the awesome and intense eyes,oh, and also the flower at the head; amazing.

When you say there is something wrong with the anatomy, you were right. The odd angle of the table made it difficult to outline the prespective of the character. Maybe if you lowered the back end of the table (make the table less skew), the body especially the right hand can be properly drawn, so the hands wont be too small.
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=Jkuo Feb 26, 2009, 11:10:08 PM
your sketches are so good @_@
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=F-AYN-T Feb 26, 2009, 11:10:58 PM
thanks! :hug: I kinda like them better than my finished works sometimes x_x

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~ArgentShuminoSai Feb 26, 2009, 11:11:59 PM
I think you need to correct her right arm for some reason, I couldn't put my finger on it.
But your sketch is so detailed and clean @w@

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=Jkuo Feb 26, 2009, 11:13:03 PM
:D well b&w can sometimes look better than color, depending on the picture.
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=F-AYN-T Feb 26, 2009, 11:13:46 PM
thank you! :D

yeah the arm is off D: But I reaaaally dont know what the problem is D:

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~crazyoveromi Feb 26, 2009, 11:14:24 PM
the arms! XDDD

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=F-AYN-T Feb 26, 2009, 11:16:37 PM
onga D: pero anu kya ung problem, di ko tlga makita,pero para tlgang may mali :lmao:

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~karuishikawa Feb 26, 2009, 11:16:41 PM
Arm to short~ :3
Aw but still, so pretty~ :D

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~ArgentShuminoSai Feb 26, 2009, 11:16:52 PM
You're welcome!

Yeah, I don't know the problem is too. But I think that the only problem in the sketch is the arm, that's for sure :3

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