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YO!! xD Finally an update!! D;
been really busy with college (too much homework!! x_x) so I can't update much anymore D;

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This is for ate :iconsaowee:'s contest. hope you like it ate Sao. :hug:
They are her OCs AC and Lora! [link]
I drew them studying cause thats what I do everyday nao TwT

well buhbye : > heeee~

ps: forgive the rough coloring on her shirt~ D: I was rushing :iconotlplz:
pss: and this is mixed media, LOL! guess which ones are watercolor, color pencil and photoshop 8D hahaha~
pss: FAIL PERSPECTIVE D;


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Tools: Prang Watercolors | Derwent Watercolor Pencil | PSCS3
Time: Some time in 1 week 8333

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AC & Lora © *saowee
Art © =F-AYN-T
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Make
HP
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HP ScanJet 2400
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Contest-Study Tiem by f-ayn-t
Critique by EvynC

I think, for starters, I should say that this is not the best I have seen you do. But it is hard to pick and choose the critiques that I do.
I do them based on whether the art makes me feel, And this does.

I think that this is a lovely seen, aesthetically, due to the simplicity of the theme, yet it is not under detailed and done in a way which is pleasing to the eye but not distracting of the main subjects. 3 out of 5 for Vision.

The scene also depicts believable characters engaged in a seemingly day to day activity, so nothing particularly special there; however you chose to approach it from a different angle than I would of expected, and have managed to fulfill foreground and background. The colours of their outfits are, however, very pleasing and work well with the emotional setting. With little details here and there which keep the eye entertained. 3.5 out of 5 for Originality, and 4 out of 5 for Impact.

Technique, with the proportions as they lead into the background went out the window, but it is hard to achieve this even for the most experienced artist, and you took a chance. Where you efforts really payed off was the tones of the colour, the delicate textures of a seemingly endless repertoire of fabrics. This and the gracefully executed detail and style of the grass blades and trees makes this a 4.5 out of 5 in terms of Technique.

Enjoyable to Critique

EvynC