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YO!! xD Finally an update!! D;
been really busy with college (too much homework!! x_x) so I can't update much anymore D;

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This is for ate :iconsaowee:'s contest. hope you like it ate Sao. :hug:
They are her OCs AC and Lora! [link]
I drew them studying cause thats what I do everyday nao TwT

well buhbye : > heeee~

ps: forgive the rough coloring on her shirt~ D: I was rushing :iconotlplz:
pss: and this is mixed media, LOL! guess which ones are watercolor, color pencil and photoshop 8D hahaha~
pss: FAIL PERSPECTIVE D;


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Tools: Prang Watercolors | Derwent Watercolor Pencil | PSCS3
Time: Some time in 1 week 8333

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AC & Lora © *saowee
Art © =F-AYN-T
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:iconsomaruiz:
This looks like a good try at perspective even though I don't really know if it's you first.
Anyway, first I'd like to note that most things that are foreshortened don't seems to "shrink" at the same rate as others, for example the girls arm compared to her torso, the arm looks a lot smaller in proportion when compared to the shoulder level not to mention the pocky box is really tiny. Then the legs seem to be a lot smaller, and yes I know they farther back but they still seem to small to me.
lol
Then there's that book on her lap that seems to somehow manage to balance on it.
XDDDD
I think the chin of both girls seems to be too much to the side while I belive it should be more centered, not dead center, but not that far from it either.
Either way I hope this is helpful in some way.
owo
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The Artist thought this was FAIR
14 out of 15 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconevync:
Contest-Study Tiem by f-ayn-t
Critique by EvynC

I think, for starters, I should say that this is not the best I have seen you do. But it is hard to pick and choose the critiques that I do.
I do them based on whether the art makes me feel, And this does.

I think that this is a lovely seen, aesthetically, due to the simplicity of the theme, yet it is not under detailed and done in a way which is pleasing to the eye but not distracting of the main subjects. 3 out of 5 for Vision.

The scene also depicts believable characters engaged in a seemingly day to day activity, so nothing particularly special there; however you chose to approach it from a different angle than I would of expected, and have managed to fulfill foreground and background. The colours of their outfits are, however, very pleasing and work well with the emotional setting. With little details here and there which keep the eye entertained. 3.5 out of 5 for Originality, and 4 out of 5 for Impact.

Technique, with the proportions as they lead into the background went out the window, but it is hard to achieve this even for the most experienced artist, and you took a chance. Where you efforts really payed off was the tones of the colour, the delicate textures of a seemingly endless repertoire of fabrics. This and the gracefully executed detail and style of the grass blades and trees makes this a 4.5 out of 5 in terms of Technique.

Enjoyable to Critique

EvynC
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:icondiamondgirl600:
diamondgirl600 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010   Traditional Artist
did u block me
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:icondiamondgirl600:
diamondgirl600 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010   Traditional Artist
cool
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:iconkazieldomus:
KazielDomus Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, you're kinda right about the perspective being a little off, but in the grander scheme of things – and when it comes to art – appreciating the effort put in to make these kinds of work come through is a pleasurable reward in itself! CX

But let's not forget the praise and encouragement you get from others who see your work, that's another thing that keeps good artists such as yourself going!

About the color of the shirt, it's completely understandable that you were rushing, but on a critical note it does kind of contrast with the rest of the piece. However, that doesn't offset the picture as a whole, so it's all still good. On a side note though, you could take time off to make a few tweaks and touches on that particular spot.

Mixed media does tend to be messy when it comes to the finished product, and from looking at each and every individual aspect of the piece it seems more apparent to me. The striped blanket at the bottom, to me, seemed realistic enough on first glance, and that's a plus.

All in all, a good piece that may need a little touching up here and there. Though I have to admit I'm a sucker for art pieces involving short-haired girls with glasses and hairclips (and the real ones, too :3), so that's partially the reason why I was drawn to this piece.

So that's another plus for drawing me into this pic; keep up the good job, and keep improving!
~KazDom
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
wow thanks a lot for the critique~ :D
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:iconmordriel:
Mordriel Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2009
Wow, the girl reminds me of someone I know; hair color included.
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:iconjinxxcore:
JinxxCore Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009
*saves to memory* I love it!
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:iconbig-j-mac:
Big-J-mac Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
Lol, if you ask me, it looks like she's thinking about more than just studying...
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:icongobi-no-houkou-kage:
Gobi-No-Houkou-Kage Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2009
*steals Pocky*
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:iconalezzita:
alezzita Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2009
CUTE!!!
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:iconyamichann:
yamichann Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2009
and colorful~ hehe congrats on winning
:D :D :D
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2009
thanks x3
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:iconzkfanart:
zkfanart Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2009
Good luck in the contest ;) I liked those relaxed studying poses, and the perspective work =D They are cute and elegant =D
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2009
thanks x33
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:iconzkfanart:
zkfanart Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2009
welcome =D :hug:
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:iconnisah:
nisah Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009
Uwaa.. I'm not a good critic but the first thing I did notice was the red haired girl's body position, her arm and her small hand.

Her body's position is kinda awkward. If I were in her place, I'd probably be having a hard time doing that pose. Same goes for her arm. It's too close. If you could've just moved it more to the left. That would've given it a more "support" look. [I don't know if you got that. XP]

And I read some parts of the two critics you got for this. *Aiarashi's right. Some proportions are tiny. XD

The texture's really good. And I really like how you color your drawings.

..but still, I don't even know how to draw, haha! XP
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009
:hug: salamat sa critique ah! :33 tama naman sinabi mo e! :333 :hug:
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:iconnisah:
nisah Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2009
You're welcome! :hug:

..btw, yung mat yung photoshopped. :))
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2009
tama ka! x'D
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:icon11arich:
11arich Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009  Student
Wow!
Really nice!
I love the perspective on pink-haired gal!!
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:iconstealthy-hellion:
stealthy-hellion Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, college. It's quite understandable (omg, you've been having classes all this time?)

Anyway, the colors are the best feature in this deviation; I hope you'll do great in the contest.
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009
yes I have classes all the time. D: (5 times a week! ) XD

:hug:
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:iconczaren:
czaren Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
I LOVE THIS FAYNT <3 :heart:
Kyaaaah I think the perspective is really nice TTwTT <3
I don't know why but my favorite part is the yellow jacket and how you colored it... Looks so real to me hahaha! <3
GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST!!
And college lol
Weeee ~

:+fav:
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009
awww thank youu :hug: :hug: :hug:
yes college :lol: XD
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:iconaho-saru:
aho-saru Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the eyes
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:iconkyoken:
Kyoken Featured By Owner May 30, 2009
argh typo I meant, "do you go to CSB? XD;;"

OTL
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
ok lng un :333
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:iconkyoken:
Kyoken Featured By Owner May 30, 2009
so pretty *u* <333


by any chance do you to CSB? XD;;
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
thank you!! :333 yes I dooo why?? :333
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:iconkyoken:
Kyoken Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
welcome 8D

a friend of a friend, who is my blockmate told me you study in csb XD;
wala lang LOL see you there! 8D
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009
will you be studying here? XD cool. xD waheheh XD
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:iconkyoken:
Kyoken Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009
yes 8D frosh plz LOL
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009
a tlga XD bee seeing you around then xDDD
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:iconkyoken:
Kyoken Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
ROFL, we met na (a few days ago)

but I didn't notice that it was you ROFL.
I was with Nique/Monique that time.
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
ORLY?? o.o wahh XDDDD
What do you look like po? CX
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:icondisasterinprogress:
DisasterInProgress Featured By Owner May 29, 2009
It's a lovely picture. The only problem is the bodies- they're a bit disproportional. I'd submit a critique but I'm not subscribed XD sooo really, that's the only problem. I absolutely love the girl with the pocky in her mouth. Great hear, I adore the eyes. The upper body is good too. I hope this helps in some way, I'm not half as good as you are, you probably know more than me anyway.
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009
thank you > <
but I appreciate all critiques :3
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:iconeyes2blues:
eyes2blues Featured By Owner May 29, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow naks naman! galing!
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:iconsitraxis:
Sitraxis Featured By Owner May 28, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
grabe ang galing mo. ;D

good luck sa contest
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:iconkaysee94:
KaySee94 Featured By Owner May 28, 2009
SO bright and cheerful~!
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:iconamaya-kbb:
Amaya-KBB Featured By Owner May 28, 2009
The colors you used are so fantastic and very real-looks. The eyes from the red-haired girl are beautiful.

<3 Amaya! ^__^
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner May 28, 2009
thank yew <3
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:iconinvaderk8:
invaderk8 Featured By Owner May 28, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow very cute.! ganda ng coloring.!!
haix., kmi babalik na ulet sa ganyan., ahaha.!
pasukan nnman hahaha.!XD
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner May 28, 2009
aheheh oonga xDDD thanks x33
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:iconililichan:
iLilichan Featured By Owner May 28, 2009
ang galing >w<
very nice!!
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:iconkonsensya:
konsensya Featured By Owner May 27, 2009
<sib?ang ganda :3 lalo na yung colors! hindi sya mukhang rushed, promise :]
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner May 28, 2009
awww thanks x33
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:iconi-nsertnameher-e:
i-nsertnameher-e Featured By Owner May 27, 2009
awww, I like how bright the colors are!! Their eyes and hair look really good.

Great job! I think you did a fine job on the perspective! >:3
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner May 28, 2009
thank you : )
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:iconkathy100:
kathy100 Featured By Owner May 27, 2009
Uwahhhh, what an awesome contest entry *_*!! I love the details *_*!
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:iconf-ayn-t:
F-AYN-T Featured By Owner May 28, 2009
thank you so much!! :hug: :hug: :hug:
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