Celestial.

[Warning] Its very long I'm so sorry, but I thought that I should give this a try.

I really like how you coloured this one, and how it gives off a theme of the cosmos.

The colouring has been done very well, especially the shading on the hair, face, nose and even down to the neck. But unfortunateltly thats where it mostly stops. If we go down to the breasts it gets abit weird. I dont know whether to classify it as a colouring or a drawing fault.

But if you look on the left you have clearly(looks like a "d" but its a cl) drawn the right breast or might I say Boob. But in the middle a line that should of been there simply isnt there. But enough of me being a pervert.

Although ZombieParadise has said that quote "and her right shoulder has been placed rather weird" I'd disagree. I'd say that Inori's left shoulder is the one that LOOKS out of place.

This is due to the part of her left shoulder next to the hair curving down or just straight, whereas if you kept it a straight line going up slightly it would of looked in synced angle wise and posed no problem.

I have to say though, the eyes have been done VERY VERY Well. But I dont know how to add emoticons on here but it would be something like this:<(^~^)>
I also love how the synchonization between the coloring of the cosmos in the background and on her clothes, her hair pin and even her hair, alothough its just the stars in it. Furthermore I personally love the ribbons going over her shoulders.

This work must of required alot of layering and coloring work. I think its fantastic. I think you focus on the details very much (keep doing this) but you need to be more aware of the entire thing.
I can tell you have been doing this because of the colouring but you also need to looks at other aspects as well such as the shape.

btw Insta-fave!

WELL DONE, Excellent for a 2am effort.