Let's start with the vision and technique. F-AYN-T, you have some neat ideas in your head and your not afraid to express them. Like the background, hair and eye detail, along with the barcode. I agree that brushing up on your CG skills, but you never really forget how to ride a bicycle. Vision and Technique: 4.5 stars.
In terms of originality I love how creative you got. Sure, it's a standard side-view, but that's about the only conventional thing about this. The background, barcode, hair colour and style. The clothing, especially the frills, were a nice touch. Originality: 4 stars.
Impact is where you were lacking, which isn't normal for the majority of your work. Everything about this piece seems so splendid and unified, and I guess that's what detracts from it. I see it, then my focus starts to shift, expecting more, but it isn't there. I don't know what else to say F-AYN-T, I guess I was just expecting more from you in this area. Impact: 3 stars.