I really love how you colored the clothes. And you made a really neat effect with the light/darkness in the hair, so pretty.... xD The background is also pretty cool but adding a couple more colors in the sky and trees wouldn't hurt. Also adding more depth and shadows. But overall it's pretty awesome.
lol, pocky's pretty good. maybe hopefully you'll come across it more times in your lifetime. very beautifully done picture! i saw your tutorial. :3 seeing a bunch of really well done drawings make me feel inspired..